+4Rhyner13
Played through and recorded it so I will attach a link when I am done editing but it was a decent map just a little feed back for you:
Pros: I liked the atmosphere, could be a little bigger to add some more detail
Cons: Try to add a little more story in the books or in the rooms that you are trapped in and never see again maybe add a dark figure in the corner of an outside area in a dimly lit area to give a face to the dark figure you mention There was no music for me, even adjusted all the settings, no in game music or custom music. When I got stuck in the cell with the zombies the zombies kept teleporting/dying as soon as they spawned so I couldn't die and finish the map
In all it wasn't a bad map just a few personal preferences and that bug at the end where the game was unplayable made me annoyed. If you have a book that pretty much tells a player to wait for something to happen by saying "It will be explained soon" and then there is a bug that never makes anything progress it is very annoying, I played this 10-20 minute map for 45 minutes because I was waiting for something to happen even though your map was bugged, please fix!
Hey, can you give me the coordinates? Because i installed this on my multiplayer server and its not anywhere here. Can you give me the cords? I would be really happy
Maybe you can try and ask this on his YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCc6FKEPk0nb7r13lqFuJTuw It may give a faster response because this website(Minecraft Maps) doesn't give any notifications from messages. Hope it helps you out!
Hey, can you give me the coordinates? Because i installed this on my multiplayer server and its not anywhere here. Can you give me the cords? I would be really happy
Sure! -661.812 5.00000 -1372.194 - Hope You Like It :D
0Fright
Hey, can you give me the coordinates? Because i installed this on my multiplayer server and its not anywhere here. Can you give me the cords? I would be really happy
-2Fortune Ventures
Hey :D We played your map multiplayer (2) the first time it worked fine when we got teleported at the doors, we went after each other. Really enjoyed the twist at the end! :D and we recorded it: https://youtu.be/nwd7_TBiKe0 Planning on playing your other map as well!
I was at the zombie part and I quickly took the spawn eggs out of the dispenser and killed the zombies, I got confused on what to do. Then I did it again and let myself die. Try to make it so you cant take the spawn eggs out of the dispenser.
Ok thanks for the feedback...I am working on a new update to fix a bunch of issues!
+1MeltinFire
I was at the zombie part and I quickly took the spawn eggs out of the dispenser and killed the zombies, I got confused on what to do. Then I did it again and let myself die. Try to make it so you cant take the spawn eggs out of the dispenser.
The Map Is Nice But Do You Really Need To Capitalise Every Word You Type? It Makes It Sound As If You Are A Robot.
Thanks! And sorry about that it was an old habit...but this was my first map (I recently just released it here though) so I have improved sense then :D Anyways thanks for playing it!
After playing this map I have some Cons and some Pros. Just a quick side note, I was unable to complete the map to due to an issue with the redstone.
Pros:
✓ I liked the use of the vines in the Warden's Office. ✓ The tripwire at the entrance of the Warden's Office was well hid and a good choice. ✓ I got a small feeling that I was in some sort of Prison.
Cons:
✕ Outside of a window I saw the redstone that was powering the map. This really put me off. ✕ I disliked when you get teleported into that hallway and the note written by the unknown person is rather dull. I thought it could tell us more information. ✕ I think way too many redstone torches were used. Try to limit them or use normal torches in some areas. ✕ The glowstone lamp at the spawn really annoyed me while I was roaming in the starting area. Too fast for me. ✕ I got a bit confused to why there was a Skeleton on the PC monitor in the Warden's Office. You could have used something else.
I would love to attempt to replay the map again if it got updated and fixed my issues said. A good attempt of a map though. Well done
~Brandon
Thank You For The Feedback I Am Working On Fixing Some Of Those Issues Now.....This Was My First Map But I Just Only Recently Submitted It. So I Have Improved A Lot More...Anyways Thanks For Letting Me Know About Those Issues!
Ehhh... Idk how to feel about this one. Its too short and it felt like more of a horror map than an adventure map. 4/10
Hey Thanks For The Feedback..Sorry You Did Not Think It Was The Best. This Was My First Map That I Created I Just Only Submitted It Recently..So I Have Improved Some More Sense Then
+6Brandon
After playing this map I have some Cons and some Pros. Just a quick side note, I was unable to complete the map to due to an issue with the redstone.
Pros:
✓ I liked the use of the vines in the Warden's Office. ✓ The tripwire at the entrance of the Warden's Office was well hid and a good choice. ✓ I got a small feeling that I was in some sort of Prison.
Cons:
✕ Outside of a window I saw the redstone that was powering the map. This really put me off. ✕ I disliked when you get teleported into that hallway and the note written by the unknown person is rather dull. I thought it could tell us more information. ✕ I think way too many redstone torches were used. Try to limit them or use normal torches in some areas. ✕ The glowstone lamp at the spawn really annoyed me while I was roaming in the starting area. Too fast for me. ✕ I got a bit confused to why there was a Skeleton on the PC monitor in the Warden's Office. You could have used something else.
I would love to attempt to replay the map again if it got updated and fixed my issues said. A good attempt of a map though. Well done
+1KK
this was a great map! I feel like you could improve a bit and maybe add some speach or something like that in there. And maybe make it a bit longer. Great storyline just needs a few improvements. Keep up the good work! :)
Sorry It Was So Short...It Takes Most People 10-15 Minutes...This Is My First Map So I Have Improved A Lot More Sense Then. But Thanks For Trying It :)
Comments
Pros:
I liked the atmosphere, could be a little bigger to add some more detail
Cons:
Try to add a little more story in the books or in the rooms that you are trapped in and never see again maybe add a dark figure in the corner of an outside area in a dimly lit area to give a face to the dark figure you mention
There was no music for me, even adjusted all the settings, no in game music or custom music.
When I got stuck in the cell with the zombies the zombies kept teleporting/dyi ng as soon as they spawned so I couldn't die and finish the map
In all it wasn't a bad map just a few personal preferences and that bug at the end where the game was unplayable made me annoyed. If you have a book that pretty much tells a player to wait for something to happen by saying "It will be explained soon" and then there is a bug that never makes anything progress it is very annoying, I played this 10-20 minute map for 45 minutes because I was waiting for something to happen even though your map was bugged, please fix!
Only because the bug made it unplayable Rate 1/5
2017-11-02 18:54
QuoteThere is a hidden lever inside one of the holes in the cell
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Quotehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z3Fv76ewgW8
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Quote2017-03-16 17:24
Quoteit was a dream it said in the end at the village "it was all a dream"
2017-03-14 17:17
QuoteMaybe you can try and ask this on his YouTube channel: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCc6FKEPk0nb7r13lqFuJTuw
It may give a faster response because this website(Minecra ft Maps) doesn't give any notifications from messages. Hope it helps you out!
2017-02-27 20:36
QuoteSure! -661.812 5.00000 -1372.194 - Hope You Like It :D
2017-02-26 21:47
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QuotePlanning on playing your other map as well!
2017-02-24 17:28
QuoteOk thanks for the feedback...I am working on a new update to fix a bunch of issues!
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QuoteThanks! And sorry about that it was an old habit...but this was my first map (I recently just released it here though) so I have improved sense then :D Anyways thanks for playing it!
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QuoteThank You For The Feedback I Am Working On Fixing Some Of Those Issues Now.....This Was My First Map But I Just Only Recently Submitted It. So I Have Improved A Lot More...Anyways Thanks For Letting Me Know About Those Issues!
2017-02-04 22:58
QuoteHey Thanks For The Feedback..Sorry You Did Not Think It Was The Best. This Was My First Map That I Created I Just Only Submitted It Recently..So I Have Improved Some More Sense Then
2017-02-04 18:53
QuotePros:
✓ I liked the use of the vines in the Warden's Office.
✓ The tripwire at the entrance of the Warden's Office was well hid and a good choice.
✓ I got a small feeling that I was in some sort of Prison.
Cons:
✕ Outside of a window I saw the redstone that was powering the map. This really put me off.
✕ I disliked when you get teleported into that hallway and the note written by the unknown person is rather dull. I thought it could tell us more information.
✕ I think way too many redstone torches were used. Try to limit them or use normal torches in some areas.
✕ The glowstone lamp at the spawn really annoyed me while I was roaming in the starting area. Too fast for me.
✕ I got a bit confused to why there was a Skeleton on the PC monitor in the Warden's Office. You could have used something else.
I would love to attempt to replay the map again if it got updated and fixed my issues said. A good attempt of a map though. Well done
~Brandon
2017-02-04 17:15
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Quote2017-02-04 02:40
QuoteSorry It Was So Short...It Takes Most People 10-15 Minutes...This Is My First Map So I Have Improved A Lot More Sense Then. But Thanks For Trying It :)
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