This map isn't terrible, but there were some problems. For example, when I pressed the "start" button, nothing happened, so I had to break out of the lobby and put the redstone block where it was supposed to go. There was also that weird chest room that made you navigate it like a maze. I got stuck in that room and I had to go on creative to continue on. Overall, I'd give this map a 5/10, because it did have a few good scenes and had some good builds.

This was actually a very good map but it could be improved. The final part where he chases you in the carpark place, adding suspenseful intense music when he's close would make it so much scarier. He also stops chasing you really quick. Another thing is, this map was very well decorated but the models were a bit overused, i think making more models would help. Also, the retextured paintings were overused a bit and if youre planning on making more horror maps, i suggest not using them, because it feels like those paintings are in every horror map ever. Also heres a tip; if you make a model for a block (say a chair) and you put the item remodeled on an invisible armor stands head, you can place it anywhere and angle it however you like. You can probably search it up but its what I do to detail the map im making. overall i had a lot of fun in this map, the jumpscares were pretty predictable but still got me once or twice. You should also look into using armor stands more, you can do a lot of decorating with them. Id love to see more from you, this was really great.