0 TheMapReviewer Quoting icatface:

I will try to be as honest as possible. It's bad.

Don't take this as a negative comment. There are many holes in this map, such as having a potion of jumping to get out of the map and parkour that's way too easy, since there are shortcuts. I don't understand the story, as I have absolutely no idea how a teacher, a laboratory, parkour and a small village are connected together. Even though its made in 1.8.8, I believe that it should be given better attention in the details. You should add in some signs at the first part of the map so people can understand the rules and story of the game.

Overall, I understand that you are not quite experienced, but since this is your first adventure map, I am okay with the map so far.
I hope the second map to this series, Evangeline II will work on the errors made in the first one.

Thank you, icatface. I appreciate the feedback! I tried to make it as vague as possible while it was still possible to know what was going on. And yes, while you could jump out of the map, that is obviously not what you should do. I do hope that Evangeline II will get some higher ratings! :P

0 TheMapReviewer Quoting Opdragoboss:

is the map multiplayer compatible?

No. It is for singleplayer only.

In Evangeline II, it will be necessary to have 2 players.

0 TheMapReviewer Quoting Rainy_Days1:

Um.. Where it's the choice to go left or right in order to leave the laboratory, you have a pressure plate. Mobs can climb up to the point of this pressure plate and you get killed because the mobs step on the pressure plate. ._. not fun...

Once you finish the big mob room/battle, you have to find the iron door. It gives you the option to go left or right, through two passageways. Going left kills you; going right moves you on to the next trial. Sometimes mobs do spawn on the pressure plate, but they shouldn't. Separating the mob room and the death room is barriers, and separating the pressure plate from the hallway is iron blocks.

+1 RichGolem Sorry I kinda cheated on the map :( in the last part I wasn't sure what to do with pickaxes and stuff like that, I thought the pickaxe was for breaking the diamond wall

+1 TheMapReviewer Quoting MrMountainMan:

This map literly took me 5 minutes because of the fact that you are survival

If it took you that short of a time, you must have cheated. Remember, you're not allowed to break blocks, and realized after I published that barriers are visible in Survival. heh.

+1 TheMapReviewer Quoting GolemGirl312:

Could have potential if there was a better story, and having command blocks give text is much better that signs (a personal pet peeve of mine). A majority of the parkour is easily skipped because of either poor ladder placement or block layout. After the equipment room, there are no checkpoints, so I had to make some myself. The end didn't seem finished, and finally, the 3rd end room makes the least amount of sense. All in all, not the worst map I've ever played, but could definitely use improvements. I will be looking forward to the next installment to see if there are any improvements. For a first map, pretty good, though.

Hi GolemGirl,

I really appreciate the feedback. I don't particularly like command block text either, but this map was made back in 1.8 where I was still new to them. I use them in the lab, because it's supposed to be an intercom. For the rest of the map, It is you thinking and I didn't know how to rename command blocks and whatnot back then. I agree that there isn't much story, but it is supposed to be vague and more will be revealed in future installments. After that big fight thing in the iron block cave, there really shouldn't be any reason for you to die, other than the lava parkour but it's very easy. The end is not finished and the second map will begin with that granite door. Also when I made the third trial, I had forgotten that you didn't need a crafting table to make a pressure plate and leaving one wall blank didn't make much sense to me.

Anyway, sorry if it was a bit amateur and had a lame ending, but all will be revealed.

0 TheMapReviewer Quoting Maxmite Gaming:

I made a playthrough of this map if anyone needs help.

Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6CG6N-mvH-Q

Great video!! In the vid, you wondered about a backstory, and Sarah and stuff, plus the ramblings of the main character. All of this will be revealed ...

0 GolemGirl312 Could have potential if there was a better story, and having command blocks give text is much better that signs (a personal pet peeve of mine). A majority of the parkour is easily skipped because of either poor ladder placement or block layout. After the equipment room, there are no checkpoints, so I had to make some myself. The end didn't seem finished, and finally, the 3rd end room makes the least amount of sense. All in all, not the worst map I've ever played, but could definitely use improvements. I will be looking forward to the next installment to see if there are any improvements. For a first map, pretty good, though.

0 BobFrankie Awesome map! Loved the video that he did too!

0 TheMapReviewer Quoting banana:

is it multiplayer

No it isn't. It's a single player map.
Quoting KyanPVP:

That was fun but way to easy for me that took me 15 minutes

Yes, as I mentioned this is the shortest in the series; between 15 and 45 minutes dependent on your skill level.

0 KyanPVP That was fun but way to easy for me that took me 15 minutes

0 banana is it multiplayer

+1 Tyler Plays Cool map, should i roleplay it on youtube?

+1 TheMapReviewer Also, quick note I forgot to add - the map is 20 - 45 minutes long.