+3 nugget Quoting Hi:

I had blindness and slowness on, so I couldn't find the market. What was the blindness and slowness for?

Same thing'S happened to me, im stuck at the start of the map :/

-1 name After playing this, play A weekend in heartsville. It's pretty much the same... the grandmother part and you get milk in the beginning, fall asleep during the drive. The only difference is the problem.

0 . Quoting JedyX85:

How should I destroy that gravel block at the purple stand? Where is the tool that let me destroy gravel block?

In the building next to Grandma Lou's house. Climb up the ladder and step on the pressure plate

0 rsmalec Nice start to a map, but you really need to warn that this isn't finished....

+1 Tildycraft7 Can you in anyway get out of the room when you are the new test subject or is it the end of the map? I am confused because it doesn't say
"END OF PART 1" or whatever.

0 ahmed i to kill grandma in the house
and doing locked open
and go


END

0 Me... How do you break the gravel? I've tried everything I can think of and nothing works!

+1 TeteusFX Can't wait to part 2!

0 Mrinin It was decent for a first map, I noticed some lava next to the blacksmith, you can suicide there and send back to the start. BTW don't use tools that break common building blocks. Or player can sequance break by breaking them.

0 The Surround Hey! i did a playthrough of your map, it was pretty good :), here's the video of the playthrough... https://youtu.be/5SmL6P8OzmE

0 Luke plzz make part two for my vid

+1 Sly Okay, there's a few things that you should fix in the next part(s).

1 - Close off areas that shouldn't be accessible. I was able to get above the map and see all the redstone and command blocks by climbing the vines on the sides of the map.
2 - When I accessed the lab, nothing happened. I got out of the bed, and saw 2 characters behind a wall. I waited for 5 minutes, pressing every block and nothing happened. I had a button that popped off of the toilet in the house (unless I wasn't supposed to get that), but couldn't place it down.
So, I had to go against your rules and break down the wall. Sorry about that :(
3 - And if you can, make it a little bit longer. I learned 3 things in the story, and there was literally nothing to go off of them.
SPOILER ALERT!!!

The grandpa was killed weeks earlier, the culprit was never found, I found the grandpa in a lab, end of map.

Other than those 3 things, good map! :)
(p.s., you don't need to be hard on yourself. I know this is your first map, and if the first map is not well received, always try again with helpful advice from your players. That's the key to success.)

Good luck in the future!
- Sly

-3 Thunder a very incomplete map doesnt tell you the milk is in the shulker box ..........cliff hanger sucks even more........... just finish the damn map before releasing it

0 Victoria Quoting Berttie:

You're meant to drink the milk, sorry if I didn't make that clear enough :(

idk, but nothing happend when i drank the milk, just the blindness and slowness gone away. What am I supposed to do ?

0 ThaHypedMaster Awesome cliffhanger mate! Really nice map. All it needs for the high-tech stuff is some more Star Wars references ;)