Hey there, I did a playthrough of your map and I just wanted to give you some feedback - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yl5BLpSh-TE&lc=z13jej2xjomufvigp04cddxzszztctmplu00k
The setting is really great. The spawn looks nice and leads on to this haunted house that looks very well detailed and designed. Everything looked really great... Then I stepped into the house. The first issue I have with the map is the lack of Haunted House-based parkour. From the beginning, you fall into a cave. And then there's a blindness maze that was just... awful. The parkour and the theme don't mix at all.
You create the Fun House, a sort of spooky manor theme, but none of the parkour makes sense in that regard. The inside of the manor with the deadly floor is out of theme and I feel like, while the parkour is perfectly playable and a lot of fun, you won't be able to grow as a creator until you are able to theme your jumps and courses.
You could try creating a large spooky dining room and have players parkour around the area. Or maybe a spooky dungeon underneath the house that looks more intimidating than an obsidian maze.
But as it was a short little map, I enjoyed it.
~ Billy
Thanks for the advice, I'll make sure to make it better and adjust the parkour to fit the settings
+2Billybo10K
Hey there, I did a playthrough of your map and I just wanted to give you some feedback - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Yl5BLpSh-TE&lc=z13jej2xjomufvigp04cddxzszztctmplu00k
The setting is really great. The spawn looks nice and leads on to this haunted house that looks very well detailed and designed. Everything looked really great... Then I stepped into the house. The first issue I have with the map is the lack of Haunted House-based parkour. From the beginning, you fall into a cave. And then there's a blindness maze that was just... awful. The parkour and the theme don't mix at all.
You create the Fun House, a sort of spooky manor theme, but none of the parkour makes sense in that regard. The inside of the manor with the deadly floor is out of theme and I feel like, while the parkour is perfectly playable and a lot of fun, you won't be able to grow as a creator until you are able to theme your jumps and courses.
You could try creating a large spooky dining room and have players parkour around the area. Or maybe a spooky dungeon underneath the house that looks more intimidating than an obsidian maze.
0ioanisjo
well looks pretty nice and well made but the second part with blindness made me so angry so i turned into game mode 1 and even like this broke yp the whole temple and i found nothing... :S
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2017-04-28 03:22
QuoteI made a video playing it: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2-ysJHVKHjY
keep It up!
2016-11-15 00:38
QuoteThanks for the advice, I'll make sure to make it better and adjust the parkour to fit the settings
2016-11-08 00:05
QuoteThe setting is really great. The spawn looks nice and leads on to this haunted house that looks very well detailed and designed. Everything looked really great... Then I stepped into the house. The first issue I have with the map is the lack of Haunted House-based parkour. From the beginning, you fall into a cave. And then there's a blindness maze that was just... awful. The parkour and the theme don't mix at all.
You create the Fun House, a sort of spooky manor theme, but none of the parkour makes sense in that regard. The inside of the manor with the deadly floor is out of theme and I feel like, while the parkour is perfectly playable and a lot of fun, you won't be able to grow as a creator until you are able to theme your jumps and courses.
You could try creating a large spooky dining room and have players parkour around the area. Or maybe a spooky dungeon underneath the house that looks more intimidating than an obsidian maze.
But as it was a short little map, I enjoyed it.
~ Billy
2016-11-07 17:14
QuoteThanks, I'll do my best to make more creative/parkou r maps :)
2016-11-05 22:58
QuoteYours Sincerely.
2016-11-05 22:16
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