+2 SuBin I was stuck in the welcome area

+9 awa416 Ok... wow this map is bad. Most command blocks don't work, courtesy of the map creator setting them all to his name rather than @p, AND to top it off, he has some command blocks set up to constantly spam the player with two childish, nonintellectual words know as YOU and SUCK, exclusively in that order, if they decide to cheat, which is the only way to progress in the map unless they are the map creator since that way command blocks will actually work. There are no words to describe the pain this map has brought upon me: someone who was trying to fix this map. Aaaaaanyways, I should probably stop before someone gets too triggered at my review. I'm gonna go play a non-broken map now, since in my personal opinion it's more fun to play a functional map, but who am I to judge.

Thanks for your time guys,
-awa416

+5 Ze_The_Fox Just finished your map, was quite disappointed. There are a lot of issues that prevent the map from being played and even after all of it the ending is anticlimactic at best.
- The first issue being the severe lack of story for an adventure map. you spawn in and you are given a book with basic instructions and a start button.
- You are first tasked with crafting a golden ingot to get a piece of redstone to advance to the first challenge room. The main issue being you don't receive a vital item to progress in the puzzle. The second being after i changed your code to better suite the map, upon breaking the redstone to move and finish the circuit, the redstone dust disappears and is unable to be obtained without creative mode. After painstakingly dealing with your impossible redstone puzzle, i discovered the shulker box was locked and couldn't be opened. Inside the shulker box is 3 diamonds for the villager for those still trying to play.
- The second issue is not explaining what to do with the cake, you simply left a panda with the words "too lazy to bake a cake" unless you have actually fed a panda cake or knew of this from an external way, you would never have known to give it to the animal.
- The third is the crafting room, the entire puzzle, you are tasked with crafting an assortment of items starting with a beacon, but after crafting it, the door did not open, there was no indication to drop it or place it, it just didn't open and after the several other issues, i assumed it would be the same for the rest and skipped to the end to find again, this shulker box was locked and couldn't be opened, it contained a vital item to progress.
- The trivia is well, really stupid. you are required to name paper in such a specific way that its nearly impossible without prier knowledge of the answers. For example the only rule you are told is "no caps" however nothing about numbers, symbols, spaces etc. to which again, i skipped the level to find a pumpkin smasher.
- Once i broke the pumpkin. i was at another road block. There was no indication on what to do with it. The villager didn't want it or the seeds, the Panda didn't want it and there was no where to place/drop it, i instead went to gamemode C once again and broke the door.
- The parkour was the only playable part of this map, you fell and you were taunted and teleported to the start again. very simple and well done. however once you reached the end again the Key in the box was unobtainable as the shulker box was once again locked.
- Finally the infinite corridor, it was boring. it felt like you wanted a 5th room but were out of ideas. It is a simple left right idea. 2 options and one resets you. Nothing about this is fun or adventurous. Another issue with the corridor is there a holes in the walls and roof revealing redstone and command blocks.

The map itself is a good idea, however lack of story, purpose and an actual playable map really ruins it. I would advise you read this post and look at it for constructive criticism. Take the map down from this site fix it and re-upload it. You have potential but right now it isn't worth anyone's time. i hope you listen and update your map, i hope to see a playable version soon.

0 Ze how do you do the redstone part, plz

0 Anonymous Wow, I can't believe you made me look...

+3 TheFoxOverlord Am I supposed to be able to break the redstone parts once I place them? Otherwise, I seem to have softlocked myself...

0 Jack21 I'm stuck at the beginning of the blue area and I can't find the walkthrough

+2 David The redstone part is impossible. You don't give any tools to move the redstone and you can't reset the room. This is unplayable.

0 Joe So I got to the blue room and couldn't figure out what to do after opening the shulker box and (incorrectly?) placing down redstone, eventually it gave me the link to the walkthrough of how to solve the redstone puzzle but as I was watching I noticed that when they stepped on the pressure plate, they were given a diamond sword that allowed them to break redstone which i was not given. Idk if I did something wrong or if it's a glitch in the map but could someone let me know, thanks!