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This is exactly what good horror is. No unnecessary jump scares that appeal to young kids, and a crap ton of eerie themes and unsettling plot points. A good horror map, does not and should not rely solely on jump scares, and the map creator obviously understands this.

I wish this map had a longer story. I played this map and when it ended I was like "Wait, that's it?" Are there any other different endings?

[Spoilers ahead]
The world was very immersive, with all the armour stands and the constant rain (even though you didn't add the marker tag for the armour stands). However, there was a lot of information everywhere (newspaper, notes, etc) and some of it did not contribute to the storyline. One good use of descriptive information is the drafted notes by Ryan in the fourth act (bedroom scene), it hinted that Ryan was trying very hard over the past two months, even though he inevitably gets murdered anyway. That really creates a big contrast between the climax and the ending.

I really liked the psychological horror part, but I wished it could have been explored a bit more. Thank you for making a map without loud, pointless fake and unnecessary jump scares, you are truly someone who understands the genre from a film standpoint. You even chose to not include actual jump scares and it still was very unsettling, props to you! Knowing this was a horror map kind of ruined the surprise for me , so I would suggest that you focus more on the detective sub-plot for the first and second act with the player actually becoming the detective (finding leads, clues, make guesses, etc) , and phased into a fully-fledged psychological horror map. (Doki Doki is a great example). That way the player would have more fun playing the map, and the horror part would balance the sub-plot as well.

The scriptwriting could have been worked on a bit more (You don't have to add the s and f word everywhere to make it seem mature), not the mention the text flew by very quickly, maybe try voice-overing instead (if you have the money or skill that is :P) or cutting down paragraphs into short sentences so it could be displayed one by one (maybe try adding a tellraw button to click on to continue to the next sentences?)

7/10 A great map that truly shows that Minecraft Horror maps are not just for kids only. The small problems I had with this map did not significantly make the map less enjoyable, and I can't wait for more maps by OP.

My grading scale:
1 Don't play this - 2 A sloppy map that is begging for attention - 3 A okay-ish that is trying to be something it isn't - 4 A decent map with a lot of problems - 5 A good map - 6 A good map with one or two cool concepts - 7 A great map that represents the genre - 8 A well-made map with good screenplay - 9 A one-of-a-kind experience - 10 I'm crying and shaking and happy that I was born in this generation to see this

I noticed that you could screw with the armor stands in the environment, sort of ruined the immersion. In my maps I usually place barriers to on the armor stands. It keeps players from messing with them and keeps them from walking through them, as if they were real people.

Hi Samuel, I downloaded your map, its kinda cool, but you can easily escape the map at the second mission.
After you've seen the crazy guy down the house, it's not clear what to do next. If you run out of the house you still can walk to the treehouse and not get teleported back to the main base.