+11 Kyarycn_ This map was horribly confusing and dumb. I've never seen a map this confusing in all the years I've played. Have you ever played a map with a random wither? The story line was not together and all the old dialogue would come back, making the tasks even more confusing. This map would not be worth playing if you don't step up your game. I'm sorry if all of this sounds rude, but I'm just being honest with you and you need to get better on your maps. I understand this is your second map, but at least the story should be consistent. If you were trying to make this map really cool and interesting, then please be aware of the story and don't go adding a bunch of withers in it unless the story seems to need it. I give this map 0/10.

+4 Guy That Is Honest I am not going to beat around the bush about this. If I seam mean or cold, its just because I'm giving my honest opinion. I found the build style very amateurish. All of the chat appeared at once, also all in the same white color, making it hard to read and annoying because it scares you. So after being kind of annoyed at that I kept playing the map. After about 1 minute into it when I was on the train I glitched out because of one of the pressure plates and I could not get back it. I had 2 choices, restart the map or quit it. After considering everything i decided to quit playing the map. It has lots of potential, but it seems as if inexperienced builders made it. If someone with a bit more experience made it, or the builder in a few months or a year or so, it probably would be a lot better. Overall its a 1.5/5 .
Thanks.

+2 cold2d I am robber, or not

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HsD2RrbLKtI

+3 MissCrazyGamer Overall, good map, but a bit wonky at certain parts. Definitely requires a bit more attention and work put into the maps you'll (maybe) make in the future!

Here is a play-through if you are interested: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r2zH12bofKI

+2 Lllama Rushed map, everything is so poorly organized and poor storyline

+7 CatCreamYT This is how I rate maps.
Uniqueness - 5 | No Bugs - 10 | Experience - 25 | Time Took - 15 | Difficulty - 10 | Leading Type of map - 5 | Detail - 5 | Progression - 15 | Replay Value - 5 | Length - 5
Using this, I rate this map 2.5/10. Here are the reasons why.
To start off, the map was overall very average. There were no things wrong with it other than other methods to make better dialogue show on screen, make backgrounds, and add detail. I wasn't too worried as this is your second map.

After that, everything went downhill. After my stuff was stolen, I suddenly had to walk into a town and do a random task of running to different buildings and simply buying select items for each specific person. This had nothing to do with the story as all I did was trade items with villagers. Once that was over, I had to press a button where i am suddenly given a choice of who stole the items on the train.

I had no idea who any of these people were and had no clues to give me an idea of who it was. It simply told me to guess based on what item the wanted. After my complete guess and randomly reading the newspaper, I suddenly am on the train and find the thief. I thought there would be more in this map at this point. I was wrong.

After finding the thief, I am suddenly placed to a complete different place and told to do parkour. After that I had to do a random puzzle, and then do a random boss fight. These all had nothing to do with the story.

TL;DR Story line was very inconsistent and did not make much sense after the first part. 2.5/10

0 Bob Jim Umm. I put my gold and iron in the ender chest in the train so i still have my gold...

-12 ZTSETTS THIS MAP IS AWESOME