As an aspiring YouTuber, you can experience many firsts in just one day.
Whether it's your first time sleeping in your California seaside home, or cooking your first meal, there is quite a thirst for firsts!
But will these firsts take a turn for the worst? Play to find out!
Note:
- This is my first map!
- If you download it, it would mean a lot to me. Thank you!
Note 2.0:
- All commands are put into functions.
- No Render Distance minimum required!
- For Vanilla Minecraft 1.13


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Creator: |
ClickMonger |
Rating: |
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Version: |
1.0 |
MC Version: |
1.13 |
Size: |
4.7 MB |
Added: |
2018-08-19 |
Downloads: |
6,723 |
Category: |
Adventure Maps |
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Comments
ClickMonger I was wondering if you had a team helping or if it was just you.
Eather way I would like to build a map, but I need help.
If you interested email: caleb
Thanks-
Caleb.
2018-08-24 01:05
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Quotehttps://youtu.be/HoPkrOA1sVU
2018-08-23 05:39
Quote(if you want continue)
2018-08-22 04:43
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QuoteHad a wee bit of frustration when buying milk coz I am impatient but that got sorted ;D
Made a video of it all so hope you enjoy!
https://youtu.be/yWRk4TRxmNE
Keep up the great work ^-^
2018-08-21 13:36
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QuoteAND I LOVED IT!!
I wish there was more, please make more maps!
2018-08-21 03:33
QuoteThen you find yourself needing some milk, which leads to accidental murder (Didn't see that a comin'!) and you find yourself in jail. I was ready to break myself out, when someone did it for me. Then the map ended. Now I'm waiting for some form of sequel.
Overall, 6/10.
2018-08-21 01:16
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Quote1. Make a sequel! I would love to see the story go on even more!
2. If you do make a sequel, try to make it longer. A longer map is just more enjoyable!
3. A plot idea for the sequel if you decide to make one: The "agent" explains what's happening and how the player is an agent, then the player goes to an agency to do multiple missions! You don't have to listen to me, these are just suggestions. But if you do listen, It would make my day!
Five Stars!
2018-08-20 15:38
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QuoteFirst off, I have to say that, well, this isn't the best map in the house. The designs weren't very realistic, the gameplay was a bit so simple to be entertaining and the overall plot was very loose. I will now break things down so I can be more clear
Starting Room
The starting room is a place where you as the creator is supposed to explain about the map, such as it's rules, where you can contact the creator, extra notes and maybe some fun little jazz, but in this map I feel that the starting room was too simple. No rules, no contact info it was simple. Next time, try adding rules, where the player can find you and maybe the creator heads if you want to. Also another thing, if you're going to use barrier blocks make sure to build something around it or make it in the void.
Builds
The main house looks nice and cozy but it's not realistic. Mainly from the porch where there is no way to exit the area and the fact that it's only your house in the area. The shop was too small for it to look like one and the prison/jail was a bit to cozy for it to look like one. Next time, try to put more thought in the realisim of your builds.
Gameplay
The gameplay was simple as well, and sometimes the objectives where confusing. For an example, when it said "Mine stone" I was confused about where said "Stone" was only to find out that I needed to rotate the pickaxe on screen. Next time, make the gameplay more challenging and entertaining.
Plot
There was little plot in this map, almost as if the plot was made as the plot was being made. Make sure that you've 100% thought of the plot before you start building the map. Also make sure that your plot has a climax, this makes it so that the map is more fun to play.
Please don't take this in a regitive way, I only want new creators like you to improve!
2018-08-20 06:46
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