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"The First One"

Created by ClickMonger

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As an aspiring YouTuber, you can experience many firsts in just one day.

Whether it's your first time sleeping in your California seaside home, or cooking your first meal, there is quite a thirst for firsts!

But will these firsts take a turn for the worst? Play to find out!

Note:

  • This is my first map!
  • If you download it, it would mean a lot to me. Thank you!

Note 2.0:

  • All commands are put into functions.
  • No Render Distance minimum required!
  • For Vanilla Minecraft 1.13

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Map Details

Creator: ClickMonger
Rating:
(127 votes)
Version: 1.0
MC Version: 1.13
Size: 4.7 MB
Added: 2018-08-19
Downloads: 6,752
Category: Adventure Maps

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-2 Caleb HI,

ClickMonger I was wondering if you had a team helping or if it was just you.
Eather way I would like to build a map, but I need help.
If you interested email:

Thanks-
Caleb.

2018-08-24 01:05

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+2 Zebs I agree with Sushii and like her I don't want to discourage you from making more maps, but I think that if you maybe updated this map and made the story line a bit more concrete it would be more fun. For example, when it comes to recording a Minecraft video, you could teleport the player to a location as if they are the Minecraft character. That way you could make it a bit more difficult and entertaining. Just an idea!

Quoting Sushii:
Heya, my name is Sushii and I will be giving some feedback about this map!

First off, I have to say that, well, this isn't the best map in the house. The designs weren't very realistic, the gameplay was a bit so simple to be entertaining and the overall plot was very loose. I will now break things down so I can be more clear

Starting Room
The starting room is a place where you as the creator is supposed to explain about the map, such as it's rules, where you can contact the creator, extra notes and maybe some fun little jazz, but in this map I feel that the starting room was too simple. No rules, no contact info it was simple. Next time, try adding rules, where the player can find you and maybe the creator heads if you want to. Also another thing, if you're going to use barrier blocks make sure to build something around it or make it in the void.

Builds
The main house looks nice and cozy but it's not realistic. Mainly from the porch where there is no way to exit the area and the fact that it's only your house in the area. The shop was too small for it to look like one and the prison/jail was a bit to cozy for it to look like one. Next time, try to put more thought in the realisim of your builds.

Gameplay
The gameplay was simple as well, and sometimes the objectives where confusing. For an example, when it said "Mine stone" I was confused about where said "Stone" was only to find out that I needed to rotate the pickaxe on screen. Next time, make the gameplay more challenging and entertaining.

Plot
There was little plot in this map, almost as if the plot was made as the plot was being made. Make sure that you've 100% thought of the plot before you start building the map. Also make sure that your plot has a climax, this makes it so that the map is more fun to play.

Please don't take this in a regitive way, I only want new creators like you to improve!

2018-08-23 21:04

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+2 rex i really like it dude! nice job!! there was a few little bugs but i really enjoyed it!! :)

2018-08-23 11:19

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+2 McBlockz It was very nice but a bit short

2018-08-23 10:44

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0 OrLiiNg iT's GooD BuT Very ShoRt.....Try To TallEr thEm in The SeconD PArt

2018-08-23 10:25

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+1 cold2d When will I be able to get back to youtubes?

https://youtu.be/HoPkrOA1sVU

2018-08-23 05:39

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0 Darknesscat wow!, really short, very good man!, just one thing, at the prison, you can just make the player wait more for escaping
(if you want continue)

2018-08-22 04:43

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+3 Flerperderp The map was short but I really enjoyed it well made.

2018-08-22 00:14

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0 Rev. Ayy this was legit funny and well put together.
Had a wee bit of frustration when buying milk coz I am impatient but that got sorted ;D
Made a video of it all so hope you enjoy!
https://youtu.be/yWRk4TRxmNE
Keep up the great work ^-^

2018-08-21 13:36

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0 Dusty About to downlodad, looks good, hope the map is as good as it looks!

2018-08-21 10:45

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0 frostedgaming too short bruh

2018-08-21 04:14

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+1 Lolly_Abby It's a first!


AND I LOVED IT!!
I wish there was more, please make more maps!

2018-08-21 03:33

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0 TheWirelessBlade So I downloaded this map (You're welcome, Clickmonger), just to see what it was like. It wasn't that bad. The first part was somewhat boring. All you did was press the button and rotate the pick.

Then you find yourself needing some milk, which leads to accidental murder (Didn't see that a comin'!) and you find yourself in jail. I was ready to break myself out, when someone did it for me. Then the map ended. Now I'm waiting for some form of sequel.

Overall, 6/10.

2018-08-21 01:16

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-1 Ender_Dragony Are there any other endings?

2018-08-20 20:42

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-1 Belle just sayin it was short but i liked it

2018-08-20 19:18

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+1 Minecratf mann i really like it dude! nice job!! there was a few little bugs but i really enjoyed it!! :)

2018-08-20 19:06

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-1 Roberto Well, I played this map and I liked it, but its to short! Try to set up new content!

2018-08-20 16:53

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+2 Five Stars Great map! It is quite short though, but a great idea. I have some suggestions for you:

1. Make a sequel! I would love to see the story go on even more!
2. If you do make a sequel, try to make it longer. A longer map is just more enjoyable!
3. A plot idea for the sequel if you decide to make one: The "agent" explains what's happening and how the player is an agent, then the player goes to an agency to do multiple missions! You don't have to listen to me, these are just suggestions. But if you do listen, It would make my day!

Five Stars!

2018-08-20 15:38

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0 PixelMaster0908 great map! kinda short tho but its still great.

2018-08-20 14:53

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0 TommyTheHeist Well.. Very short map, 5 min max. I understand that this is your first map but still..

2018-08-20 14:28

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+1 JopeliH Great map!!

2018-08-20 12:45

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-1 mikeproplayerer 5 minutes map but cool

2018-08-20 11:12

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+3 Sushii Heya, my name is Sushii and I will be giving some feedback about this map!

First off, I have to say that, well, this isn't the best map in the house. The designs weren't very realistic, the gameplay was a bit so simple to be entertaining and the overall plot was very loose. I will now break things down so I can be more clear

Starting Room
The starting room is a place where you as the creator is supposed to explain about the map, such as it's rules, where you can contact the creator, extra notes and maybe some fun little jazz, but in this map I feel that the starting room was too simple. No rules, no contact info it was simple. Next time, try adding rules, where the player can find you and maybe the creator heads if you want to. Also another thing, if you're going to use barrier blocks make sure to build something around it or make it in the void.

Builds
The main house looks nice and cozy but it's not realistic. Mainly from the porch where there is no way to exit the area and the fact that it's only your house in the area. The shop was too small for it to look like one and the prison/jail was a bit to cozy for it to look like one. Next time, try to put more thought in the realisim of your builds.

Gameplay
The gameplay was simple as well, and sometimes the objectives where confusing. For an example, when it said "Mine stone" I was confused about where said "Stone" was only to find out that I needed to rotate the pickaxe on screen. Next time, make the gameplay more challenging and entertaining.

Plot
There was little plot in this map, almost as if the plot was made as the plot was being made. Make sure that you've 100% thought of the plot before you start building the map. Also make sure that your plot has a climax, this makes it so that the map is more fun to play.

Please don't take this in a regitive way, I only want new creators like you to improve!

2018-08-20 06:46

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